The Newport Ladies Book Club: ATHENA Edits

Just sent Heather back her manuscript with my notes.

Gotta say, readers are going to LOVE the last line.

(How's that for torture? Teehee.)

Meet SHANNON

Meet ILANA

When Ilana needs a hysterectomy, her dream of having children is shattered for good. To add to the insult, Ilana is laid off from her job due to an injury on the heels of the hysterectomy surgery, and she can't seem to find any pain relief. Medication and physical therapy are never enough, which turns into a frightening prescription drug addiction. Through friendship and feeling support from the book club ladies as she goes through recovery, Ilana becomes stronger, and happier, than she ever thought possible.

Meet VICTORIA

Victoria’s job is to make sure things run smoothly with the cast and crew on the reality wedding show, Vows, and that prime time television ratings soar. Oh yeah, and she needs to make sure that the surprise wedding that happens at the end of the show between the bachelor and his chosen lady love goes off without a hitch. The only problem is, the longer Tori works on the show, the more she falls in love with Christopher—the bachelor himself. Through her friendships made with the ladies in book club, Tori discovers what risks she is willing to take.

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Wednesday, July 6, 2011

ATHENA Edits

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